I wanna know how deep it is,
the life below the sea......
How blue, how dark, how warm.
I wonder if I could be a part of it, what would have I been?
It seems to me that the colours shall fade
if once I'd visit the sea
For I know from all my heart,
I bring dark luck to all.
They swim and glide and slide
but I can only crawl,
For no one seems to see my pain,
I've to bare it all.
I've no voice, no sight, no aim
I'm lost among the soil.....
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3 comments:
Hi sneh.. as i said when i read it the first Time .. I read it with sneha as the "I" .. sneha trying to fit into this world filled with people who she might think are different or maybe better than her!!!. People who dont really know her and dont understand what she is going through..
Well reading it again.. i also interpreted the "I" simply as a human being trying to defy nature and her beauty accepting the fact that some of her creations is much superior.And also feeling remorse at having a big hand at destroying it systematically over the centuries.[b]"For I know from all my heart,
I bring dark luck to all."[/b]
Both ways a beautiful written verse with a touch of sadness
hi.......i dont understand the nature of ure intense feelings....but from my own experience i would say that all our experiences are our own, they r soooooooo real for us,and at times NOBODY understands!! its a process that happens in ones life for ones growth as a person..... i just want u to know that im there whenever u need me.....i love u so much...everything will be fine....just keep the faith
beautiful expressions Sneh ..so we have a sensitive poetess in making ...keep loving yourself and stay tuned to your inner child ..
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